Tuckered out

All of the walking, climbing, stairs, slides and play really wear Ivan out.
He’s a walker and a dancer.
He chases his sister all around the park and then he passes out.

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  1. It’s free verse. I’d break the lines differently.

    All of the walking, climbing,
    stairs, slides and play
    really wear Ivan out.

    He’s a walker and a dancer.
    He chases his sister all around the park —
    and then he passes out.

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